This poem is about dying to the old self, the dreary past and rejuvenating into a new endeavor, a new beginning of sorts. Written merely on a whim. I can see there are a few parts that are choppy, but I do not wish to mess with this poem and ruin the emotion and intention behind it.
If you like it leave a favourite and a comment. I'm hoping to post a poem every other day until I am present with my writings.
This was gorgeous, but I'd just STRONGLY recommend you change the very last line to sound in tune with the whole story. I understand you don't want to ruin the original complexion but definitely there are lots of ways to slightly fix that thingy, I even wrote the alternative to "allowing the old to end" in my mind