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People have greedy hands,
tearing at tender hearts.
Seeking a piece of soul,
wanting to belong in part.

In the end of innermost desire,
the yearning to contain --
something so pure yet fragile,
only to mistake and make pain.

Those of good and even evil
have dared to tread this road,
only to learn the reason why
people have this endeavor forbode.

Run far and fast my child,
depart from this affair.
Guard your hapless heart,
save your soul to someday share.

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Written: 10/16/12
This is about guarding one's heart. As of late I've noticed how quick people are to pursuing one another in the affairs of love, yet to scared at the same time. When the fear takes over it leads to pain and more issues. People rush it instead of waiting until the right time and guarding themselves, even those who say they're waiting end up rushing into it and don't guard themselves meaning not much logic is put into something that requires both heart and mind.

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~Kailani-e Nov 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing, I love the way you wrote it : ) Such a deep meaning as well, good job!
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~Extranzia Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :)
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~Kailani-e Nov 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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~Extranzia Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :)
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your welcome, is truly awesome :)
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~Extranzia Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I just submitted another poem if you wish to check it out. :)
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~YoshiofRedemption Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
So true and beautifully written. Wonderful. :)
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~Extranzia Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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~YoshiofRedemption Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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